Ahahaha, I haven't posted in awhile.
Rain is sweet and nice to eat.
I finally realize what that deviation Tasty Rain is about now.
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And I forgot what I was going to say.
What did I want to say?
In the book Fiction Class, there's this part where Arabella is teaching about descriptions.
Which sentence reads better?
1. 'He walked into the room and hit the wall and then hit the other wall. '
or 2. 'He staggered into the room.'
Personally I find that the first one reads better.
'... and then he hit his head on the corner of the table and the brains hit the floor...'